seven or eight
count them again
A haiku with a grand concept, in fact, it’s a meta-haiku It starts as a very precise observation of visual reality and then suddenly stops in doubt. This switching of levels is very nice.
Thanks so much for this thoughtful comment, Eelco. I now know more about this haiku than I did when I wrote it.
i like the attention in the poem. lovely
[...] reason, for haiku with numbers in them. In fact, one of my favorites among my own haiku is still this one that I wrote way back in, like, the first week I ever wrote haiku. I went looking for more [...]
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