mooning around
by Melissa Allen
moonlight I finally listen
.
the light we save by being dark
.
coming and going spirit moon
.
Red Dragonfly
haiku. poetry.
moonlight I finally listen
.
the light we save by being dark
.
coming and going spirit moon
.
cool, lovely
Thanks, Susan.
Wonderful! I drew me to read it a few times so that I might tease out deeper and deeper meanings. Loved reading this one.
Oh, so glad you liked it and got so much out of it, AngelaJaneGrace.
For me, the most powerful/effective of the three is the first. I ‘see’ the others but I ‘feel’ that particular one.
Thanks for your reaction, Paganini, I always like hearing what effect my words have on people.
Melissa,
Just noticed it’s snowing on your masthead
and these four words you placed in a row:
“moonlight I finally listen”
offer so much to the reader, listening to your inner voice, your spouse, the sound of night. All good possibilities.
–Peter
Yes, let it snow, let it snow, let it snow…
and I wish I had paid more attention to the moonlight in the past….