May 1: 2 (Seven Eggs Today)

seven eggs today
in the mailbox — I close
the lid carefully





Revision 10/29/10:


seven eggs
in the mailbox
reckoning my options

One thought on “May 1: 2 (Seven Eggs Today)

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