seven eggs today
in the mailbox — I close
the lid carefully
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Revision 10/29/10:
seven eggs
in the mailbox
reckoning my options
seven eggs today
in the mailbox — I close
the lid carefully
________________
Revision 10/29/10:
seven eggs
in the mailbox
reckoning my options
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