May 3: 5 (Seven or Eight)

seven or eight
sparrows
count them again

4 thoughts on “May 3: 5 (Seven or Eight)

  1. A haiku with a grand concept, in fact, it’s a meta-haiku 😀 It starts as a very precise observation of visual reality and then suddenly stops in doubt. This switching of levels is very nice.

    1. Thanks so much for this thoughtful comment, Eelco. I now know more about this haiku than I did when I wrote it. 🙂

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