May 3: 5 (Seven or Eight) May 3, 2010September 7, 2010 / Melissa Allen seven or eight sparrows count them again Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
A haiku with a grand concept, in fact, it’s a meta-haiku 😀 It starts as a very precise observation of visual reality and then suddenly stops in doubt. This switching of levels is very nice. Reply
Thanks so much for this thoughtful comment, Eelco. I now know more about this haiku than I did when I wrote it. 🙂 Reply
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A haiku with a grand concept, in fact, it’s a meta-haiku 😀 It starts as a very precise observation of visual reality and then suddenly stops in doubt. This switching of levels is very nice.
Thanks so much for this thoughtful comment, Eelco. I now know more about this haiku than I did when I wrote it. 🙂
i like the attention in the poem. lovely
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