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A haiku with a grand concept, in fact, it’s a meta-haiku 😀 It starts as a very precise observation of visual reality and then suddenly stops in doubt. This switching of levels is very nice. Reply May 4, 2010 at 2:54 am
Thanks so much for this thoughtful comment, Eelco. I now know more about this haiku than I did when I wrote it. 🙂 Reply May 4, 2010 at 9:30 am
A haiku with a grand concept, in fact, it’s a meta-haiku 😀 It starts as a very precise observation of visual reality and then suddenly stops in doubt. This switching of levels is very nice.
Thanks so much for this thoughtful comment, Eelco. I now know more about this haiku than I did when I wrote it. 🙂
i like the attention in the poem. lovely