May 3: 5 (Seven or Eight) Written by Melissa Allen seven or eight sparrows count them again Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related 4 thoughts on “May 3: 5 (Seven or Eight)” A haiku with a grand concept, in fact, it’s a meta-haiku 😀 It starts as a very precise observation of visual reality and then suddenly stops in doubt. This switching of levels is very nice. Reply Thanks so much for this thoughtful comment, Eelco. I now know more about this haiku than I did when I wrote it. 🙂 Reply i like the attention in the poem. lovely Reply Pingback: Across the Haikuverse, No. 5 (Too Much Homework Edition) « Red Dragonfly Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.