sun clouded over
sick child reads
about the moon
storm on the way
sick child coughing
by the window
for the sick child’s noodles
These are three separate haiku, not really intended as a sequence, though as I was looking through what I’d written this morning it occurred to me that they could be seen this way. At any rate, they seemed to need to be together for now.
Don’t worry, the sick child will be just fine.
2 thoughts on “May 13: 1-3 (Sick Child)”
They work well as a series; the first the strongest.
Yes, I think so too, Pearl. And thanks for the other nice comment. 🙂