(not a narrative)
four a.m. bitterly spitting sleep out of my mouth
the speeds of light and sound meet in the storm
dying wind
where they were left
the dolls sleep
at the end of the storm the birds begin again
the newspaper brought
by the car in the night
the crane cries
light reorganizes itself around the edges of the leaves
dawn
the cat crows
in my ear
morning juice
a green bug climbs up
the broom handle
*
You’re not going crazy. I’ve revised a bunch of these since the last time you read them.
These are beautiful. I especially like the cat one.
good point. i should go sleep. yeah. every moment there is ku material all around us. cool on that.
This was very gorgeous and compelling. Loved the forward motion of it to dawn.
Pearl
Thanks all for the kind words.
(And Wrick — look at all those longer middle lines! 🙂 )
yeah. i see. your line by line phrases are becoming stronger too.
It must be the master class I’ve been taking the last few days. 🙂
WHAT?! you’re taking a master class now too? how’m i ever supposed to keep up?
Don’t be so modest, Wrick. I meant from you. 🙂
I enjoyed the idea of the light reorganizing the world… whether we sleep or not every day dawns anew. Can’t be all bad.
EB 🙂
Excellent pieces. I love how you describe without describing.
Thanks Patti! That’s a great comment, I’ll have to think about that one.
Lovely… it’s nice to know something beautiful can come out of insomnia.
Thanks, David. I’ve really been enjoying your work, you have great vision.