1.
spitting watermelon seeds the dark spits back
2.
the grasshopper rises so slowly — I think I must be dreaming
2.
the Buddha hides behind the fence where the chickens peck feed
1.
spitting watermelon seeds the dark spits back
2.
the grasshopper rises so slowly — I think I must be dreaming
2.
the Buddha hides behind the fence where the chickens peck feed
I like all of these, but especially #2. I can see it, and I can feel it.
Great comment, Bill — thanks.