August 26 (The moon) August 26, 2010September 7, 2010 / Melissa Allen the moon at my father’s window his thin face Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
A one line haiku: the camp fire burns the misty moon halved by thin cloud Alan Summers 1. “Stepping Stones: a way into haiku” edited Martin Lucas ISBN 978-0-9522397-9-6 2007 2. “presence # 4” haiku magazine May 1997 ISSN 1366-5367 all my best, Alan haiku competition: http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html . Reply
Nice one, Alan. Having just returned from a camping trip myself this one really resonates with me. Reply
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A one line haiku:
the camp fire burns the misty moon halved by thin cloud
Alan Summers
1. “Stepping Stones: a way into haiku” edited Martin Lucas
ISBN 978-0-9522397-9-6 2007
2. “presence # 4” haiku magazine May 1997 ISSN 1366-5367
all my best,
Alan
haiku competition: http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html
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Nice one, Alan. Having just returned from a camping trip myself this one really resonates with me.
beautiful!
Thanks!
very touching
the aging moon compared to the aging parent …
EB
Thanks, Elisabeth. This one means a lot to me.