October 30 (Turning leaves)

turning leaves —
the next page
of sheet music

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4 thoughts on “October 30 (Turning leaves)

    • Ooooh — I really like that ku, Wrick. Not only the synesthesia of color/sound but the red associated with the word “crash” which makes you think, possibly, of blood — and just the word “crash” associated with fallen leaves which are usually depicted as floating or drifting or something — but having them crash, and maybe bleed, somehow gets at the pain and mutilation that all those stripped-bare trees evoke. Nice work. 🙂

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