November 21 (Inflated balloon) November 21, 2010November 19, 2010 / Melissa Allen full moon the inflated balloon even emptier Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
blue moon– the dog barks through the night chasing shadows Forgive me for junking up your comment section, Melissa, but I think I like this version better. What do you think? Reply
I like the second one better too, less cute, more open to possibility. (And you must not consider yourself to be “junking up my comment section” by submitting cool haiku for my inspection — this is what I live for!) Reply
Good one, Mellisa…essentially spirituality, peace and joy is about emptying this balloon we fill with earthly air (read things), i think so, wishes, devika Reply
Red Dragonfly 
blue moon–
the dog barks through the night
chasing his shadow
blue moon–
the dog barks through the night
chasing shadows
Forgive me for junking up your comment section, Melissa, but I think I like this version better. What do you think?
I like the second one better too, less cute, more open to possibility. (And you must not consider yourself to be “junking up my comment section” by submitting cool haiku for my inspection — this is what I live for!)
Good one, Mellisa…essentially spirituality, peace and joy is about emptying this balloon we fill with earthly air (read things), i think so,
wishes,
devika
Thanks, Devika. Peace and joy to you. 🙂
Yeah, this one is great, another lonely one? Love the contrast between the two objects in this
Thanks, Ash. 🙂