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blue moon– the dog barks through the night chasing shadows Forgive me for junking up your comment section, Melissa, but I think I like this version better. What do you think? Reply November 21, 2010 at 3:31 pm
I like the second one better too, less cute, more open to possibility. (And you must not consider yourself to be “junking up my comment section” by submitting cool haiku for my inspection — this is what I live for!) Reply November 22, 2010 at 1:17 am
Good one, Mellisa…essentially spirituality, peace and joy is about emptying this balloon we fill with earthly air (read things), i think so, wishes, devika Reply November 21, 2010 at 9:57 pm
Yeah, this one is great, another lonely one? Love the contrast between the two objects in this Reply November 23, 2010 at 4:15 am
blue moon–
the dog barks through the night
chasing his shadow
blue moon–
the dog barks through the night
chasing shadows
Forgive me for junking up your comment section, Melissa, but I think I like this version better. What do you think?
I like the second one better too, less cute, more open to possibility. (And you must not consider yourself to be “junking up my comment section” by submitting cool haiku for my inspection — this is what I live for!)
Good one, Mellisa…essentially spirituality, peace and joy is about emptying this balloon we fill with earthly air (read things), i think so,
wishes,
devika
Thanks, Devika. Peace and joy to you. 🙂
Yeah, this one is great, another lonely one? Love the contrast between the two objects in this
Thanks, Ash. 🙂