December 9 (Stars)

stars
as if nothing was ever
any different

.

(runner-up, The Haiku Foundation Facebook contest, November 2010)

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4 thoughts on “December 9 (Stars)

  1. oh yeah. this ku puts a grin on my face. speaking of a great perspective adjustment. yeah. cool. it’s all in the greater scheme of things…

    funny, i was just thinking about the crystal clarity of stars here.

    midnight
    the stars so sharp
    my eyes ache

  2. sanjuktaa says:

    Melissa, you are my favourite haiku poet. I loved this one posted on Haiku foundation page.And though it has been suggested that it could be polished and phrased better and that could be perhaps right, but i like it the way you’ve worded it. Maybe the spontaneity of it adds to its beauty…

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