I read the first line expecting something different, but after reading on, I realized just how wonderful it is. The two ways it can be interpreted (the season or a literal fall) gives this haiku that extra something special…unless I’m reading too much into it. But anyway, lovely work as usual!
Red Dragonfly 
Very good. Don
Thanks, Don. Just saw this — for some reason WordPress thought it was spam even though it didn’t think your other comment was.
I read the first line expecting something different, but after reading on, I realized just how wonderful it is. The two ways it can be interpreted (the season or a literal fall) gives this haiku that extra something special…unless I’m reading too much into it. But anyway, lovely work as usual!
Thanks, helikal. Yes, I did intend the two meanings. Always nice to have an attentive reader. 🙂