fog
I can’t help thinking
that what’s invisible
must be better
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If you haven’t visited ku on this yet, what are you waiting for? At least you should go over there and see the picture that prompted this.
(Yes, I left this as a five-line ku over there, but I like it this way better.)
Red Dragonfly 
Melissa,
Just wanted to say how wonderful it is to discover a new voice
whether in a poem or a blog.
As you know I’ve only recently found my way here
from issa’s untidy hut to red dragonfly to a foggy mountain scene in hawaii to who knows where–all before the first cup of coffee.
If that doesn’t jump-start the haiku mind.
I admire your willingness to put it on the line–your new haiku each day are like an ongoing conversation with the world. One I can’t keep from listening in on. Thanks.
–Peter
Thanks so much, Peter! Comments like yours mean a lot. It’s wonderful to have a new reader to join in the conversation. 🙂
and by the way wanted to say that I just discovered the other day your wonderful haiku in December’s “Gean” (“one leaf’s / slow somersaults …”) – it’s high on my list of favorites for the year. 🙂
Thanks, you mean in The Heron’s Nest Dec. 2010 issue:
one leaf’s
slow somersaults . . .
oh to start over
Oh … of course I meant “Heron’s Nest,” Peter! Sorry, I should never try to comment on things at midnight. 🙂
Melissa,
I’ll bet you knew that Tito at the Icebox blog uses four lines when ‘three lines are not enough’. He calls it haiqua.
No way! That is awesome. I must go check that out, I haven’t been back there in a while. More Haikuverse material!