(first strawberries) May 15, 2011May 14, 2011 / Melissa Allen . . . first strawberries I open my mouth for you . . . DailyHaiku, 4/21/2011 . . . Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
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Beautiful, sensual and fresh.
Thanks much, Paul.
Ooooh I like this! Really captured my attention 🙂 x
Thanks, Kirby. 🙂
I open my mouth
cut in half—
such hollow hearts
# 65. Alegria Imperial, CA
Strawberries on my cheerios are no longer strawberries. They will never be the same.
LOL, Sully…what a great compliment. (I think. Unless you mean that we’re ruined the strawberries on your Cheerios. 😉 )
Yeah, that haiku of Alegria’s totally knocks me out too.
One of the most sensual haiku I’ve ever read. 0-0
Thanks, Yousei. 🙂