(winter dawn) May 21, 2011May 19, 2011 / Melissa Allen . . . winter dawn a coffee cup ring on the sleeping laptop . . . DailyHaiku, 4/22/2011 . . . Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
The 2nd and 3rd line for me explode like shooting stars! Thank you sharing it and everything here, Melissa. Reply
Hmmm…sleeping laptops, shooting stars…not sure I see the connection. 😉 (Just teasing. Thanks, Alegria!) Reply
bwahahahaa @ alee9. “lines exploding like shooting stars” – hey. i didnt say that. i wish i had tho. those 2 lines whoosh the air out of me with a feather. – cool ku Melissa. aloha. Reply
You guys are coming up with all kinds of fascinating metaphors today. Stars and feathers. Exploding and whooshing. I feel a little overwhelmed… Reply
Red Dragonfly 
Wow!
Thanks, Alan. 🙂
The 2nd and 3rd line for me explode like shooting stars! Thank you sharing it and everything here, Melissa.
Hmmm…sleeping laptops, shooting stars…not sure I see the connection. 😉 (Just teasing. Thanks, Alegria!)
bwahahahaa @ alee9. “lines exploding like shooting stars” – hey. i didnt say that. i wish i had tho.
those 2 lines whoosh the air out of me with a feather. – cool ku Melissa. aloha.
You guys are coming up with all kinds of fascinating metaphors today. Stars and feathers. Exploding and whooshing. I feel a little overwhelmed…