(swingset) June 10, 2011May 31, 2011 / Melissa Allen . . . . . swingset into ……and out of thin ……air . . . DailyHaiku, May 29, 2011 . . . Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
bwahaha – gotta like the swing. set. of your visual words with this ku. way fun. as well as the beauty of into and out of thin air. yeah. way cool. Reply
Love it! I can feel the wind rushing by me and that slighty sick feeling as my stomach drops on the back-swing 🙂 Reply
Beautiful, Melissa. I go right back to childhood and the moments of getting in touch w the sense of “someday I’ll be flying properly”, which of course I haven’t done yet, an earthbound being, as I am … Reply
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Beautiful haiku – simple, but says so much. // Peter.
bwahaha – gotta like the swing. set. of your visual words with this ku. way fun. as well as the beauty of into and out of thin air. yeah. way cool.
Love it! I can feel the wind rushing by me and that slighty sick feeling as my stomach drops on the back-swing 🙂
Wonderful poem. I found it amusing imagining it ended with the word “earth”.
Beautiful, Melissa. I go right back to childhood and the moments of getting in touch w the sense of “someday I’ll be flying properly”, which of course I haven’t done yet, an earthbound being, as I am …
Thanks, Peter, Wrick, Kirsten, Matthew, Johannes…great to see you all here. 🙂