(something invisible) June 26, 2011June 25, 2011 / Melissa Allen . . . fireflies something invisible keeps appearing . .Presence 44, June 2011 . . . Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
We don’t get fireflies near where I live, so these haiku’s are nice and always welcomed. It also inspired me to write about something involving fireflies. So thank you. Reply
this ku evokes a sense of ah and magic – invisible and appearing – beautiful connection and visual image. zing. lanterns beyond the creek fireflies a bon dance beyond the creek fireflies yeah, it’s bon dance season here. Reply
Had to Google “bon dance.” Now I have to go to one. I don’t believe they are traditionally celebrated in Wisconsin, however. Reply
Wow! Talk of power in this haiku…with its truth, too! Congrats again, Melissa!
I do so love your firefly ku!
We don’t get fireflies near where I live, so these haiku’s are nice and always welcomed.
It also inspired me to write about something involving fireflies. So thank you.
this ku evokes a sense of ah and magic – invisible and appearing – beautiful connection and visual image. zing.
lanterns
beyond the creek
fireflies
a bon dance
beyond the creek
fireflies
yeah, it’s bon dance season here.
Had to Google “bon dance.” Now I have to go to one. I don’t believe they are traditionally celebrated in Wisconsin, however.
excellent haiku – love it
Thanks to all for your v. kind comments. I’m so glad you enjoyed this.