(leaf fall)

.leaf fall i keep saying no

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leaf
fall
i
keep
saying
no

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haiku first published in Modern Haiku 42:3

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13 thoughts on “(leaf fall)

    • Nice, Wrick…
      I should stop by your blog and leave comments about how much I am liking your haiga these days and especially your haibun-ga (as Lidia Rozmus calls them). I get them in my email (and in my Google Reader) and they always make me happy.

    • Yes, I’ve tried it that way, aditya… in the end I like it in this vertical shape because of the association with the meaning, but I know what you mean about the one breath.

  1. Melissa, I wanted to reply with a complete response to your haiku. I like it a lot. It leads me to several things. But it will take some time for me to get it right. Meanwhile your haiku cycle is moves on. Hopefully I will get something to you.

    Sully

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