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woodsmoke
the Milky Way drifts
between now and then
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haiku: DailyHaiku 8/24/2011
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Red Dragonfly 
sour smells
the crack of the bat echoes out
Congratulations!
Thanks, Martin… love that line “sour smells” and the crack of the bat really complements it.
This haiga took my breath straight to the Milky Way. A beauty. The art work looks like a silverpoint. Another beauty. Must share on word pond, Melissa!
Thanks so much, Donna, I’m always honored to appear on word pond!
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love this one.
Thanks, Angie. 🙂
Another beauty. Love when a poem moves me to dream!
love it, Melissa, full of autumn & clear, cold skies!!
Thanks, Andrea and Susan. 🙂