Found some of my earlier ones in Danish some weeks ago, written in a time where I didn’t know better – my toes still hurt. You’re right. The majority 5-7-5’s I come across seems to hold too much info and doesn’t flow naturally. IF I have written more of them I am blissfully unaware of them 🙂
Keep it up & together.
(“this has been The Cryptic Message of the Day”)
Red Dragonfly 
With this one it was love at first sight!!
And I bet you didn’t even notice that it’s 5-7-5. 😉
ha, ha, no I didn’t ;-D Maybe it’s because there’s just enough words; not too many, not too few.
Not too many 5-7-5s work out that way, that’s for sure… I think I’ve only written 2 that I actually like.
Found some of my earlier ones in Danish some weeks ago, written in a time where I didn’t know better – my toes still hurt. You’re right. The majority 5-7-5’s I come across seems to hold too much info and doesn’t flow naturally. IF I have written more of them I am blissfully unaware of them 🙂
Keep it up & together.
(“this has been The Cryptic Message of the Day”)
great jux, Melissa.
Thanks, Bill!
Rich with domesticity, rusticity and history.
Thanks, Robert!