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spring rain backwards until the beginning
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summer rain
some of you in
some of me
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autumn rain preparing the palimpsest
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forgot water could be so heavy winter rain
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credits: spring rain, Modern Haiku 42.3; summer rain, Frogpond 35.1; autumn rain, Modern Haiku 43.1; winter rain, bottle rockets 26
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love your first haiku/senryu melissa!
quite erotic!!
i meant: “summer rain”…
Thanks, Pamela. 🙂
Wonderful. Nice sequence. Really loved the Frogpond one.
Thanks, L. Rain on.
something tells me you could rain all day
ohhhhh…. love it, Peter.
sure, life could be sweet on the sunny side of the street.
We’re fine here on this side, thank you very much.
Sunshine is not good material, no.