(rain on wet leaves) . rain on wet leaves the way the lawyer pronounces “divorce” . Kokako 16, April 2012 . Advertisements Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
A poignant jux. I’m not familiar with Kokako, but congratulations on the publication. Bill K Reply March 24, 2012 at 12:19 pm
Thanks, Bill. It’s a New Zealand publication, so not surprised you haven’t run across it! Reply March 24, 2012 at 4:29 pm
Nice haiku, Melissa. I am thinking “april is the cruelest month…” Sully Reply March 25, 2012 at 3:54 pm
A very powerful haiku, Melissa. I read this over several times. It was great to see you in the pages of Kokako. Hope you’ll visit us again in NZ 🙂 Reply March 26, 2012 at 1:26 am
Thanks, Kirsten…I wish I could visit you for real! 🙂 Such a beautiful country… Reply March 28, 2012 at 12:14 am
beautiful imagery, i like it. but the word divorce always bring a pause on me. nice poem. Reply March 30, 2012 at 5:50 am
A poignant jux. I’m not familiar with Kokako, but congratulations on the publication.
Bill K
Thanks, Bill. It’s a New Zealand publication, so not surprised you haven’t run across it!
good imagination!!!
Nice haiku, Melissa. I am thinking “april is the cruelest month…”
Sully
Yes, that’s about the size of it, Sully. 🙂
A very powerful haiku, Melissa. I read this over several times. It was great to see you in the pages of Kokako. Hope you’ll visit us again in NZ 🙂
Thanks, Kirsten…I wish I could visit you for real! 🙂 Such a beautiful country…
beautiful imagery, i like it. but the word divorce always bring a pause on me. nice poem.
Thanks!