(is[n’t]) August 1, 2012August 1, 2012 / Melissa Allen . dusk what is and isn’t an apple . Presence 47 . Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
Beautifully turned. That’s a great second line. An old one: sunset an apple rests where it fell Reply
Thanks, Bill. Yours is lovely too — it has that quality the best haiku have of being utterly simply and obvious and transparent and yet full of layers of meaning. Reply
Generally, I do not gravitate toward short forms, but I was very pleased to read this poem. Thank you. S. Thomas Summers Author of Private Hercules McGraw: Poems of the American Civil War Reply
Red Dragonfly 
Beautifully turned. That’s a great second line.
An old one:
sunset
an apple rests
where it fell
Thanks, Bill. Yours is lovely too — it has that quality the best haiku have of being utterly simply and obvious and transparent and yet full of layers of meaning.
Generally, I do not gravitate toward short forms, but I was very pleased to read this poem. Thank you.
S. Thomas Summers
Author of Private Hercules McGraw: Poems of the American Civil War
Thank you very much! I’m glad you stopped by.