(See this post for an explanation of what’s going on here.)
Jane:
“This is a very gentle way of doing word play and getting double duty out of words. In English we have many words which function as both verbs and nouns. By constructing the poem carefully, one can utilize both aspects of such words as leaves, spots, flowers, blossoms, sprouts, greens, fall, spring, circles and hundreds more. … This is one of those cases where the reader has to decide which permissible stance the ku has taken.
spring rain
the willow strings
raindrops“
– Jane Reichhold, Haiku Techniques
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Me:
sunset
on the beach
red burns
the rain spells
come and go on
our bare backs
barefoot
sand spits
water on our toes
Red Dragonfly 