April 26 (Alternating Current) April 26, 2011April 25, 2011 / Melissa Allen . . . alternating current the river and the moon . . (Daily Haiku, 4/17/2011) Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
Ahhh… you’ve made me think, a rare occasion, yet… that is what haiku is meant to do! I leave here, this echoed thought. The high tide slows a river’s current. _m moon tide its rising water slows this river Reply
I had clicked the ‘like’ button at the facebook site but I love it again, here. shifting tide– we alternate thought currents Thanks again! Reply
Great one!
Thanks, Charlotte. 🙂
Ahhh… you’ve made me think, a rare occasion, yet… that is what haiku is meant to do! I leave here, this echoed thought. The high tide slows a river’s current. _m
moon tide
its rising water slows
this river
Thanks, Magyar…yeah, that is an interesting thought.
I had clicked the ‘like’ button at the facebook site but I love it again, here.
shifting tide–
we alternate thought currents
Thanks again!
Oh…I like that one…thanks!